Below is the second draft of my paper. I have made quite a few changes, both content and error wise. There were a lot of instances where I mentioned a term/idea in relation to my argument but I did not introduce that idea and therefore this would create confusion and likely mean that some readers couldn’t fully understand the paper. I have also amended mistakes and edited in adherence to the MLA format like I stated. At this point I am content with what I have produced and will leave it here and move onto the Journalistic article. At the end of the assignment if I have time left over I may look to return and improve the paper but I am happy to leave it as it is.

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